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7/31/2013 9:24:38 PM
Gabe Shelly Posts: 95
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Lady,
You sense me here, And all I can do is stare-- For you are the fire, Burning me with your flames, And I am but a cool breeze on a cold day-- If you would but consider me... In the stars you are written For you are a goddess amongst men
7/27/13
(...there were all these gorgeous gals walking by in their business clothes everday to and from work. I couldn't help it, my ADD was going haywire, and what was worst they didn't even pay a passing glance at me. It was like they were models on the catwalk-- it hurt, but I guess I deserved it.)
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