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6/22/2013 7:50:37 PM
Gabe Shelly
Posts: 95
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I kissed her sweetly for the branch that connected us,
But she already said "she was ready"--
We never spoke of it...
Mom cried,
Then she was gone, too
6/19/'13
edited by Gabe on 6/24/2013
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