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5/27/2013 3:52:34 AM
Nato Calubiran
Posts: 23
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Drips down my head
Looking at the sky
Bright and red
Slow and just still
Here waiting
And so I will
Falling on the asphalt
Drip, drip, drip
Slowly tearing my heart
Mother nature
I'm torn and crying
Don't leave me asunder
May 27,2013
Rain, rain, rain Contest Entry.
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