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5/20/2013 2:26:22 AM
Nato Calubiran
Posts: 23
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Do remember me
Hope tangled on a string
Love isn't a thing
Arrogance
Like a fallen tree
Branches and twigs wither
The whole body suffers
Pestilence
Love is full of lies
Full of hatred and despise
Bringing people demise
Entropy
I keep on waiting
For the tree to bear fruit
For the fruit to ripen
This patience
I love you so much
My reason for breathing
The reason I'm living
Mannequin
This is my entry for the contest
Melancholy Memory
Pls. leave a comment after reading.
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edited by Yamawaro on 5/20/2013
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