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5/3/2013 10:53:27 PM
Gabe Shelly
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Beauty and Kindness
It is believed the latter comes with the former,
But that is not right.
The former is something for which we yearn--
While the latter is something that we learn.
They rarely come together
edited by Gabe on 5/3/2013
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