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5/1/2013 7:11:42 AM

Teresa Lindsay
Posts: 16
Life is never easy; it hits us with the unexpected
We must learn to go with the flow, or get toppled
Nothing is ever the same, everything changes
Bad choices leave their mark on us
At times the bad choices rule our lives and decisions
Giving us disappointments so bitter we lose faith
We lose our way and do things that not right
It takes an angel to show us the way
To set our feet on the right path again
Some still fall by the wayside, not realizing the danger
Others start over on the new path and findredemption
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