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5/1/2013 7:06:50 AM

Teresa Lindsay
Posts: 16
Together since forever, as friends
Nothing could ever separate us in life
We went thru some rough times
We enjoyed the good times, laughing
You stood beside me, protected me
We picked each other up, dusted off the dirt
When the other had fallen in bad times
No subject we could not talk about
Even our love lives were open to the other
We endured in friendship when others didn't
We were best friends when others said impossible
You left me behind when you died
Grieving for such a loss of friendship
I know I will never find one as great
I cling to your memory to help me go on
I honor you my friend, my staunchest supporter
You will live forever in my heart.
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