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4/28/2013 1:48:09 PM
Gabe Shelly
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Diamonds on Elephant Ears,
A beauty from Heaven's tears.
Silver and green in a pretty, little scene,
Water reflecting light like a firefly in the night.
All atop velvetty ears every sumer year
(Elephant Ears are a type of plant. When water droplets restupon them and the light reflects off of them they look like little diamonds.)
edited by Gabe on 4/28/2013
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