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4/2/2013 2:59:25 AM

Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133

It's All Come to This

Fought years to keep your heart,
Rightfully mine from the start,
Ignored everything else,
Felt so stupid and stressed,
Learned you'd later squash this heartin my chest

The last time,
We looked in each others eyes
Savaged my insides

It's all come to this...
Our final words with no kiss
No hugs and no sign of remorse,
It's obvious things have taken theircourse,

Your way or highway
You don’t give a **** what I do,
Wasted many hours trying to talk toyou,
It's like trying to knock down a brickwall,
Your love was never intended for thelong haul

Foolish thinking your abusive days wereover,
Guess that's impossible,
Your an asshole undercover,
One certainty, you wont change,
Future with no “you”
No 7 Steps system,
No healing time frame

Too mad to talk I left you there,
Guardian Angel made my choice veryclear
All my efforts washed to the sky,
Wars over, I need to say goodbye
Tears run down my face and I feel rage,
Like fine wine, my happiness will growwith age.

By Sharon Van Buskirk

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