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Forum Home » High Critique » No Resolution

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1/1/2013 1:57:56 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
It's a New Year
Comes a New Fear
May not meet expectations
High hopes with no expectedreservations
Make things work right
Try to sidestep every bite
Open new doors
Keep climbing them floors
Wave to those new
Try new recipes,
Start a new crew
No need for resolutions
Make your own constitution
Be the best you can be
Maybe everyone wont see
The ones that do
Will stop acting a fool
They'll get the gist
Put up an iron fist
Be at your back
When the world tries to attack
This is the beginning
Keeps the world spinning
Look out for you brothers and sisters
We'll finally hear them rich bad boyscry whimpers
Grin gradually turns teeth and smile
Feels good
Stand away
They knew a mile long sword would stackthem one day
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