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12/6/2012 6:43:26 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
First week on a new job
De Javu, It's High School again

Employees talking about their twentiesyears celebrations
Getting wasted and drinking
It's a dud of a conversation
When I tell them I don't drink

Then I begin listening
I'm sitting in a booth filling out aform
You guys are at the bar
Talking about another co-workersrelationship storm

Oh man Oh man,
I'm keeping work and personal separate
I really don't care how much they thinkI'm desperate
I'm sure they'll say I'm stuck up,
Or tease over a few drinks I'll spillwhen tripping over a bump
But these guys at the end of the day
To my face, they'll have nothing to say
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