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12/6/2012 6:43:26 AM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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First week on a new job De Javu, It's High School again
Employees talking about their twentiesyears celebrations Getting wasted and drinking It's a dud of a conversation When I tell them I don't drink
Then I begin listening I'm sitting in a booth filling out aform You guys are at the bar Talking about another co-workersrelationship storm
Oh man Oh man, I'm keeping work and personal separate I really don't care how much they thinkI'm desperate I'm sure they'll say I'm stuck up, Or tease over a few drinks I'll spillwhen tripping over a bump But these guys at the end of the day To my face, they'll have nothing to say
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4/22/2019 1:57:34 AM
Hanna Zoey Posts: 1
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Good effort lynn. I would definitely want to listen more of your poems.
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