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11/28/2012 12:36:11 PM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Will the weather stop being bipolar
Making my allergies feel like a chronicdisorder!
Dizziness, sneezing, did I mentioncongestion
All I'm asking is for Mother Nature toshow me some affection

When Puffs is my new best friend
I just hope this uneven weather willend
I do get enjoyment and peace from rain
For about thirty minutes, not all day

Dishes, laundry, cleaning
You'll just have to wait
Non-important deadlines,
I'm going to be late
Sinuses aren't willing to negotiate
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