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11/4/2012 1:16:26 PM
Lynn Dolly Posts: 133
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Who on earth trampled your heart somuch Stop taking your anger out on us Seems like your taking your revenge outon all women Pretty sure that on it's own is a sin
Your going to save everyone frommissing dollars? Are you planning to giving us yourmoney you big baller? Didnt' think so, Shut up and sit down Let the grown ups talk and work thisout
United Stated isn't a play ground We're not Yatzi dice you can throwaround We're people, even the 47% that youdont care about Hope your car doesn't break down aroundhere When the wild west doesn't likesomeone, it's a scarey town
Of course you'd have your shotgun, Your entourage, your pitbull And cant forget golden teeth Those things along will block thebullet from anyone that takes a peek.
Hopefully next week I'll have my way And you'll be forced to see four yearsof what could've been your payday
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