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10/26/2012 4:24:16 PM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
I could cry for you,
But what good is that gonna do?

Need to move on
Be an instrument in life's song

There are people that need me
Those that know me
Those that have never seen or heard me

Life is too short to spend in salt andwater
Replace it with love and laughter
Let the bad boys torched in flames forcausing disorder
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