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10/18/2012 9:49:36 PM

Schuyler Johnson
Posts: 17
Its black or its white;
to me the day looks bright.
At times I need to remember the other side of the cent;
if im careless my mind will set a precident.
Moments in dark times of distress;
pitty and self loathing can be my mistress.
Out the window look past the city to spy the sun;
aquire a different view pull out from my duldrom.

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