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10/18/2012 9:49:36 PM
Schuyler Johnson Posts: 17
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Its black or its white; to me the day looks bright. At times I need to remember the other side of the cent; if im careless my mind will set a precident. Moments in dark times of distress; pitty and self loathing can be my mistress. Out the window look past the city to spy the sun; aquire a different view pull out from my duldrom.
-- ...then again, Ive been known to fib ;') http://skykingentertainment.net
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