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10/18/2012 9:26:16 PM

Schuyler Johnson
Posts: 17 		Travail memory lane, hash up the past;
long day behind, home at last.
Bump the ego, bruise my pride;
into this verse I run and hide.
Throw it out of my head, clear my mind;
lay to rest anew whats meant to be left behind.

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