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10/12/2012 9:40:09 AM
Schuyler Johnson Posts: 17
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Nip in the air, leaves beneath my feet; crunch, crunch, crunch, cycle of seasons repeat. Seems like just last year we were here; change aint so bad, nothing to fear. The beat goes on, time travels forth; birds descend down from the north. Soon will be the day, carols we'll sing; to grandmas house, gifts we'll bring.
-- ...then again, Ive been known to fib ;') http://skykingentertainment.net
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