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10/7/2012 11:34:43 AM

Schuyler Johnson
Posts: 17

Those words I said on that blessed day;
the connotation of them just will not decay;
Traveled so far trudged a long long road;
finally found the one I wished to hold.
Afforded my heart to have and defend;
together with you I'd stay till the end.
A German am I so rigid and set in stone;
to you I give my blood my flesh my bone.
Hills and valleys we each dare to cross;
toilsome days and nights we turn and toss.
Live every day as a new challenge and chance;
You and I as one we make music through our dance.
On my own power or per your desire;
tomorrow I'll still be here with you through the fire.
That vow uttered at that hour;
my love on you I will continue to shower.

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