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For poets who want unrestricted constructive criticism. This is NOT a vanity workshop. If you do not want your poem seriously critiqued, do not post here. Constructive criticism only. PLEASE Only Post One Poem a Day!!!
9/30/2012 12:29:52 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
Clock is ticking
I've been thinking,
So many times,
How many truths turned into lies,


On T.V,
On the phone,
On Craigslist,
Billboards on the way home,


People don't want the truth,
They'll back the lie,
Pays more to go back to work,
Than to watch the big guys die
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