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9/14/2012 9:11:54 PM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
I do not like you,
I could write a thousand words,
But then I'd be inviting you,
To stir in my thoughts

I'd rather root for the underdog,
That cares about others,
That doesn't discriminate,
Seeks peace, not war, that frowns onhate

When election day arrives,
As an American citizen I'll abide,
To voting on rules and policies andpoliticians,
I want the future to break ground,
I don't want another one of historiesrenditions.
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9/16/2012 4:25:30 AM

Amy Green
Posts: 8
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