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9/6/2012 5:50:14 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
This may be your last day,
How do you want to spend it?
Laying out on the driveway..
Maybe under my car..
In the tunnel by the creek..
Perhaps in the bush on the other sideof the fence...
Tormenting my dogs on the fence becauseyou have no other defense...
Maybe leaving huge dukes in the planterand front yard...

Your day will come pussycat..
When all your obnoxious purring willpay off.
Ill open that sliding glass door andthe last seconds of life will be chaos,
You'll try to scram up the fence, yourbutt getting stuck on a branch,
Tia and Freddy will be so happy theyfinally made their catch!
edited by svlynn18 on 9/6/2012
edited by svlynn18 on 9/6/2012
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