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8/25/2012 8:20:52 PM Rebecca Larkin Posts: 1	False cheer shines through the glittery red ink, Letter after colorful letter, Hopes and dreams are drained down the sink, Letter after colorful letter... Dead inside is this empty life of lies, Letter after colorful letter, Woods are filled with broken cries Letter after colorful letter... 'Tomorrow' will never come, hope will never shine, Letter after colorful letter, I will never be fine- Letter after colorful letter... A flutter of hope, sputters and dies Letter after colorful letter. The smiles of the gel-pen always lies Letter after colorful letter. edited by psychofreak on 8/25/2012
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8/28/2012 6:40:01 AM Lynn Dolly Posts: 133	I dig..Very good write!
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