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8/13/2012 8:35:07 PM

Abhishek Mondol
Posts: 2
In a heap of careless bloodsheds

Shades of different twilights

And murders for that lone sake

for pennies clenched in fist to fight




with every stroke of a violence

born out of several reasons

u can feel the growth of a stranger silence

the one that bloomed through all seasons




In cheap so cash and a filthy trash

dumped with broken bones of fate

and a deal he made for a hunger's bash

with countless slaughters of helpless mates




but a hand that causes a thousand pains

not always dwells with a cruel mind

faces behind those bloody stains

belongs to a being of a different kind.
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