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8/13/2012 2:26:36 PM

Lynn Dolly
Posts: 133

Sometimes I just have to cry,
Nothing can change what occurs inside,
Heart mourns
Spirit weeps,
Desire clarity, gotta dig deep

Ive tried holding it in,
Nothing positive comes,
Good and bad voices argue,
Repels harmony of turtle doves

Learning to let it go,
Not an easy thing,
Recognizing lost control,
I acknowledge this with a ring,

Cant ignore than I'm human,
Biological needs ignore people needingto be pleased,
Overwhelming at first, but I welcomethis with ease,
Society wants to be emotionally numb, Irefuse to spread that disease

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