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8/8/2012 5:15:37 AM

Sharon Morken
Posts: 133
I think you should go to rehab,

you say noooooooo,

ya youre all wack ,

cause youre on crack,

ya wont go go go,

you wont take the time,

if your gym boys think your fine,

i tried to make ya go to rehab,

ya text LMAO,




You'd rather be at the crib with Mike,

Party at eight, gonna get so high,

Youre a well known smooth talking ladies man,

Your secret crush, cybroman stan,

always brough Jack D. to school,

a few times had to call the man Dr. Drew,




I think you should go to rehab,

you say noooooooo,

ya youre all wack ,

cause youre on crack,

ya wont go go go,

you wont take the time,

if your gym boys think your fine,

i tried to make ya go to rehab,

ya text LMAO,




They would't let you take the medics wheel,

all cracked out, trying to do a deal,

white coat dude had to ask why you here,

You explained you'd been attacked by a dear,

Rubbing alcohol was all you found,

to ease the pain and mellow you down,




I think you should go to rehab,

you say noooooooo,

ya youre all wack ,

cause youre on crack,

ya wont go go go,




You say you dont wanna drink again,

dont want to loose your FB friends,

refusing to spend 2 months,

away from your gym boys and your cybroman love,

whatever helps you sleep,

at night that booze must go bye bye,







I think you should go to rehab,

you say noooooooo,

ya youre all wack ,

cause youre on crack,

ya wont go go go,

you wont take the time,

if your gym boys think your fine,

i tried to make ya go to rehab,

ya text LMAO
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