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7/28/2012 10:27:45 PM
Luis Martinez-Rivera
Posts: 5
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Nothingness-
pure,
vibrant,
black-and-white.
Oh-
the brightest you say?
Oh-
elegant you believe?
Have you ever,
wished upon a star?
Constellations,
the true color,
of canvas,
that is the sky!
A dark sea,
black-and-white
twinkle,
light and bright.
Black-
White-
Oh!
Orion's belt....
A little to the left.
A little to the right.
True color,
in black-and-white.
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