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Introverted, quiet, compassionate, giver

Sister of four biological brothers ,two adoptive brothers

Lover of God, Family, Country

Who feels love, compassion, dedication

Who fears downward spiral of our nation

Moral decline of the people

Would love to see a national revival

Resident of Georgia, USA

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****Contest***Growing Old***Aging***

Blog Posted:8/21/2016 7:33:00 AM

Senior Discount

Ali Liebegott

I want to grow old with you.
Old, old.

So old we pad through the supermarket
using the shopping cart as a cane that steadies us.

I’ll wait at register two in my green sweater
with threadbare elbows, smiling
because you’ve forgotten the bag of day-old pastries.

The cashier will tell me a joke about barbers as I wait.
He repeats the first line three times
but the only word I understand is barber.

Over the years we’ve caught inklings
of our shrinking frames and hunched spines.

You’re a little confused
looking for me at the wrong register with a bag
of almost-stale croissants clenched in your hand.

The first time I held your hand it felt enormous in my own.

 

Aging

As the fog shrouds everything with damp
Settles into the eaves
Nature huddles in dens and nests
Droplets cling to all leaves

Foggy now in the thought process
Pathways slow just a bit
Not happy about this aging
What's the future in it?  

 

Two examples above on the topic of aging..I am sure that you could type in poems about aging on the internet and get plenty of examples to read before you write your poem..I am so excited to hear the humor that you will come up with in your poem about aging, growing old, maturing, or from a young person's perspective maybe some good qualities you see in an older person whom you admire or someone who you think is funny or maybe a couple that you hope to match in their love with your future marriage..

Have fun!! Make it sing joy!! 

I have two wonderful entries already!!

 

Thanks for participating..

 

Sara



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Date: 8/23/2016 9:09:00 AM
Part of growing older for me has been the persistent frustration with computers! For some reason I can't find your contest on the contest page. I'll keep trying!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/25/2016 3:40:00 PM
Richard, I contacted you personally about my contest so I hope that you are on your way to writing one and entering it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Date: 8/21/2016 12:40:00 PM
How uncanny - I started to write a poem on aging before you posted the contest ... but I'll save that one for another time as it won't fit your specified forms:-) A great topic I'll enjoy writing a poem for you Sara:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/21/2016 1:50:00 PM
Jan, I have found that great minds work in the same direction..LOL..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am looking forward to a great entry..You probably could change what you have written to suit either of the forms accepted..Sara
Date: 8/21/2016 9:12:00 AM
Sara, this is an awesome topic There are MANY of us "more mature" poets on here at Soup!! Good models of what you are looking for with these poems here. I find it always easier to use humor when writing of these things too!
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Date: 8/21/2016 1:45:00 PM
Andrea, I do believe that it is true many of us on here is past fifty but of course life is nifty after fifty..Thanks for dropping by..

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