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Deborah Guzzi writes full time. Her third book, The Hurricane is available through Prolific Press. https://prolificpress.com/bookstore/prolific-books-c-12/the-hurricane-by-deborah-guzzi-p-151.html Her poetry appears in Allegro, Artificium, Shooter, & The Foxglove Journal in the UK, Subterranean Blue, Existere, The Ekphrastic Review, Scarlet Leaf Review & Subterranean Blue Poetry, Canada - Tincture, Australia - mgv2>publishing, France Cha: Asian Review, China - Vine Leaves Literary Journal, Australia - The Scarlet Leaf Review - Greece, Ribbons, pioneertown, Sounding Review, Bacopa Literary Review, The Aurorean, Liquid Imagination, The Tishman Review, Page & Spine & others in the USA. 


Haibun Prose Poetry and haiku

Blog Posted:2/5/2013 3:54:00 PM

What wonderful writingeveryone who tried the form haibun in the Mix It Up Contest did!!! So wonderful
in fact that I am doing a new contest using the haibun form again! I do not want the hard work you all put in polishing your haiku to be lost. Your Prose Poetry was exquisite and such a pleasure to read, so enjoyable for a word hound like me. I wanted to let you know how proud I am you participated in the learning process.

[Please note, I did not require season words in your haiku which pushed some of them into the more modern category.]

Below from Wikipedia you will find more complete info on Haibun.

PLEASE keep going! The new Contest will focus on SPRING.


[The term "haibun" was first used by the 17th century Japanese poet, Matsuo Basho, in a letter to his disciple Kyorai in 1690. Basho was a prominent early writer of haibun, then a new genre combining classical prototypes, Chinese prose genres and vernacular subject matter and language. He wrote some haibun as travel accounts during his various journeys, the most famous of which is Oku no Hosomichi (Narrow Road to the Interior). Basho's shorter haibun include compositions devoted to travel and others focusing on character sketches, landscape scenes, anecdotal vignettes and occasional writings written to honor a specific patron or event. His Hut of the Phantom Dwelling can be classified as an essay while, in Saga Nikki (Saga Diary), he documents his day-to-day activities with his disciples on a summer retreat.

Traditional haibun typically took the form of a short description of a place, person or object, or a diary of a journey or other series of events in the poet's life.  Haibun continued to be written by later haikai poets such as Yosa Buson, Kobayashi Issa and Masaoka Shiki.

 Haibun in English

Haibun is no longer confined to Japan, and has established itself as a genre in world literature which has gained momentum in recent years.

The first contest for English-language haibun took place in 1996, organized by Michael Dylan Welch,* and judged by Tom Lynch and Cor van den Heuvel. Anita Virgil won first prize, and David Cobb won second prize. The contest resulted in the publication of Wedge of Light (Press Here) in 1999. The first anthology of English-language haibun was Bruce Ross's Journey to the Interior: American Versions of Haibun (Tuttle), published
in 1998.]

*Charles Henderson,Yasmin Khan, Poet Kash, Dane-Ann & a few others have been under the
tutelage of Michael Dylan Walsh for about 2 years now of an on and the haiku
Checklist I asked most of you to print out is written by him.

I have posted comments on some of your writes and I would like you to TRY to write your Prose Poetry [ie: the narrative part] in THE PRESENT TENSE. Bring us to the moment of the memory with you and ILLUSTRATE it with your haiku, bringing in the SIGHTS, SOUNDS, SCENTS, and Tactile feel in the story.





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Date: 2/6/2013 9:34:00 AM
I have believed in YOU Yassie since day one, and I only wish I could do more! You have a home with me always but I have no idea how you could get to me and there are your lovely girls too. Sometimes it is so hard to be a woman. XXXOO
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Date: 2/6/2013 6:05:00 AM
Debbie many thanks for my placement, will give this a go in the present tense...David
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Date: 2/6/2013 6:00:00 AM
I thought that was difficult but am willing to give it another go thanks for placing me Debbie xx
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Date: 2/6/2013 5:24:00 AM
Hey guys NO ONE was hurt by using past tense..I was just having fun talking to you ,, I could blab forever BUT it is true & does make more sense if we write the haiku as if we are in the moment,, the prose [to match it!] would be more powerful in the ptrsent tense [sat on my glasses can't see so excuse the mispellings?]
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Date: 2/5/2013 8:58:00 PM
Enjoyed this contest...though I did not have time to change it to present tense. My sister (teacher) gave me some new knowledge tonight that I might use on the Spring one. Thanks for my placement. To me getting the haiku right was the hardest part....well other than not knowing you wanted present tense lol That then became a new challenge....and hope I'm up to it. Blessings to ya !! Will read winners tomorrow.
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Date: 2/5/2013 8:02:00 PM
I'm GOBSMACKED! Haibun is uber fun. Thanks for introducing me to this sumptuous form and for my placement (!?!) Just read Caties and I was so ... wrenched... by her words, I'm not certain I can do more reading/writing tonight. This must have been a very difficult contest to judge! And yes, when I know I can do better and have the time and the contest isn't closing, I am absolutely one for giving 'er another go! We learn by practicing the art and trying, always trying, to find the creative balance between listening to sage advice from those experienced and trusting our own creative instincts, becoming comfortable with our voice, growing...confident. Such a gift your teaching is to Soup! Such a terror are the outspoken students ;-) xox Dee, still growing, finding her footing.
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Date: 2/5/2013 7:45:00 PM
I think this was my favourite contest to date. I love the mixing of prose and haiku. Thank you for introducing us to this form - and for being such a great teacher! All of the winning poems I've read so far are fantastic.
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Date: 2/5/2013 6:12:00 PM
I couldn't be more pleased that YOU are pleased. I gave as many of you as I could special attention and the progress you have made in understanding what is in a haiku and how to construct a haiku is fantastic!
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Date: 2/5/2013 5:19:00 PM
I have been reading the amazing prose/haiku combinations, and have been astonished by the talent I see on Poetry Soup. This contest was such a fun challenge...but wow, a lot time spent reading, you must have been up late at night, Debbie! Thank you very much for sponsoring this great contest, and placing mine among such great writers! I'm pleased to be in such fine company. :)
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Date: 2/5/2013 4:18:00 PM
deb, this was one of your best contests to date. I really enjoyed reading the winter stories it produced! Congrats to all your winners and thanks for my placement.
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