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New Contest - Rick Parise's Blog

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A Pondering Poet~

Echoing Resolve

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Easy river run
down vast beauty light
in morning dawn
crest before my eyes

For autumn rain has gone
sparking light of silver grace
now lay peaceful strokes
on hillside of new day

Each thought still remain
in splashed hues of poetic verse
a quenching bath of love
upon soft sky of birth

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New Contest


Blog Posted:4/12/2012 1:05:00 PM

FIRE...

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Speak as If You Are a Theatrical Performer

10-12 lines

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A Seed In The Wind

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Years lost, the barren floor

a thousand poppies, shall live no more

through twilight's calm, a storm raged on


of flickering fire, before the dawn



Wither o' heights of careless breath

the evil wind, will give no rest

so burn my orange fire, burn of death

soon rebirth, shall find a nest

until that day, I stand subdued

where painted skies,

my only muse...

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Date: 4/13/2012 3:25:00 PM
LOL - I'm fine with the chic-a-dee'z
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Date: 4/13/2012 4:30:00 AM
A unique contest idea, Rick! Yeah ,where ARE all the dudes?
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Date: 4/13/2012 2:49:00 AM
Lovely poem Rick..nice idea for a contest.. hugs xxx (sorry another dudette)
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Date: 4/12/2012 11:28:00 PM
What happened to all the dudes....lol
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Date: 4/12/2012 11:27:00 PM
You all gave me a BIG smile........after 7 days straight!!!!It's my friday...FINALLY!!!!!Yes P.D. LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!Few words for the contest...so I don't spoil the approach!!!LOL~////////////God bless each of you....NOW, get UP on stage SHOUT whisper....Laugh...CRY__--and perform>>>
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Date: 4/12/2012 6:58:00 PM
one more thing... I read your poem out loud tooooo... sorry for bothering your blog... I know how annoying it is when poets keep on and on... one or two comments are enough.. always...
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Date: 4/12/2012 6:55:00 PM
Rick, how is that for a "theatrical performance" lol.... my daughter is looking at me so crazy right now... she just heard me rehearse this out loud... than i dotted it down on your comment box.... if you like What I have written below...i will continue it.... if you don't.... no one will ever ever.. know how it will END... an end with no end... lol... If I'm on the right track,,,I will try it out and call it " PERFECT RAIN!" ta ta ta....always..your little PD
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Date: 4/12/2012 6:50:00 PM
................Me!! I can't see... I rage against the wind... Nobody hears me... a rain so deep no one dares to understand.... a rain that cut my soul in half.... Two piece that will never entwine or feel as one. I feel, my eternity has no end...............
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Date: 4/12/2012 6:43:00 PM
ok... wow... I think I spoke to soon, on my soup mail... this might be an interesting contest... hummm... not much detail... here... now let me go and check your contest... always...pd
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Date: 4/12/2012 3:26:00 PM
So dramatic and beautiful. Should be such inspiration to all !! Looking forward to seeing what others write for your contest, Rick!
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Date: 4/12/2012 2:29:00 PM
Sounds like a hot time in the old town tonight. Ouch!
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Date: 4/12/2012 2:26:00 PM
Wow! That's a great poem, Rick. What fabulous inspiration for your contest. Love, Carolyn
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