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Location: north node of pisces in past lives

Characteristics: moon-angel, summer gypsy

Philosophy: in life and love, don’t settle for less than 100%

Greatest sin: can do nothing for a day and stay in the “ now”

Education: a student of life on earth and outbound

Style: blend of classic and eclectic

Strengths and weaknesses: shadows chasing light; light chasing shadows

Luxuries:  inner spirit dancer, theater actress, educator, painter, poet, interior designer

Addictions: diet coke, rare collections, travels around the world

Unforgettable scene: pathways of Prague in Czechoslovakia around dusk

Claim to fame: the world's worst typist


IT'S A WOW KIND OF EPIPHANY !


Blog Posted:8/2/2013 12:39:00 PM


 it took me days to judge this as the  poems received were all stunning... aside
from the emotional appeal, originality, and assonance of the works posted, i
had to choose those which captured brilliantly the essence of epiphany as
described on the contest page...

 and now, just a few words for the winners:

 Giorgio V: a sensitive awakening of a moment in time, painted perfectly in words and rhyme...

 Annalise Brigham: your lines speak of pained awareness rich in tone and poetic mood.. sublime!

 ‘’Glimpses of Epiphany”: beautiful entry rich with imagery and insight.. can’t forget the  'Christmas lights’ thrown in to enhance the whole piece...

 Carrie Richards: Wonderful undertones of child –adult realizations using  a stirring contrast approach , no words wasted here!

 Russell Sivey: a moving scene where along your lines, ‘something hit me..’  very transformational...

 Julie Heckman:  the serenity  of nature  amidst the boom of life is so well scribed; an
epiphany indeed...

 Seren Roberts:  a solid grasp that one’s demise is fate’s right makes this defined entry so distinct...

 * to Debbie Guzzi, Joe Flack, Constance, Troy Greece, Richard Lamoureux,
Olusegun Arowolo, Ellie Dapne: your written paintings allow me to feel
your journeys through striking discoveries...
 *special citations go to Harvey Liege for contributing his unfinished dramatic image
that is not intended as an entry,

and Godwins Piyo's amazing collage of past icons that went over the 26-line
requirement... a must-read!
 thank you all for being champs in my heart! What a greeeat day!


see you in my new adventure which is being posted NOW!


hugggs and love!



 
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Date: 8/13/2013 1:34:00 PM
WOW! Lovely as ever! Wish I'd had a beautiful poem that placed. Best of wishes Net. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/3/2013 6:44:00 PM
Wow! You honor me with this placement of "Arrested Moment", Nette. I love how you describe how each one made you feel. That's wonderful! Thank you! And that's a lovely picture!Love, Annalise
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Date: 8/4/2013 10:37:00 AM
well-deserved, anne... glad you enjoyed!..:)
Date: 8/3/2013 3:52:00 PM
You know nette you got me LOL YES there was end rhyme I was so intent on mixing 2 forms my own form et cetera & the end rhyme so as to have the verse unpeel like an onion I totally repressed the fact I was using end rhyme LOL, I will change the form label to VERSE BIG HUGS! Thanks
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Date: 8/3/2013 1:38:00 PM
wow thanks Nette....I guess next time i will leave my emotions out of this..lol...luv Godwins
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Date: 8/3/2013 2:24:00 PM
gods... splendid write; awhhh, you went over 26 lines... oh, emotions are the core of poetry.. congrats!..;)
Date: 8/3/2013 8:07:00 AM
Thanks Nette for your thoughtful comments.
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Date: 8/3/2013 7:21:00 AM
This is a great presentation of the winners, Nette. I look forward to reading their poems! Congrats to all.
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Date: 8/3/2013 6:48:00 AM
Thanks,Nette for an exciting and interesting contest...Very challenging.And thanks for the placement too.
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Date: 8/3/2013 5:26:00 AM
Nette, I am very honoured with my placement in your contest, thanks. Your contests never fail to inspire me and take me wonderful places as a writer, They make me go deep within to find the beauty and words. I look forward to your next challenge. Constance
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Date: 8/3/2013 12:31:00 AM
I don't poem much but I liked the theme ,so I went for it. Thank you for the recogniton. Makes me blush!
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Date: 8/2/2013 11:40:00 PM
donns, thank you for the congrats.. join my next gig..;) huggs
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Date: 8/2/2013 3:35:00 PM
Hi nette.....wow you look stunning....and congratulations to all the winners of your contest....off to read them.....:-)
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Date: 8/2/2013 11:40:00 PM
did you find it?..:)
Date: 8/2/2013 2:16:00 PM
You know how I admire your own work, so I am extremely honored, Nette. Thank you !! ps.....looking forward to hearing you (hopefully) on Drake's next show! :)
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Date: 8/2/2013 1:57:00 PM
thanks, seren.. and hello to peter duggan who did ' glimpses of epiphany'.. if your poem wasn't a knock-out, it would have not placed as you did not put your name!..:) huggs
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Date: 8/2/2013 1:51:00 PM
Nette I am overwhelmed with my placement in your contest, I thank you sincerely. Well done and congrats to the winners, I will look forward to reading them all ...Seren
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