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Inspiration found in a friend... - Michael J. Falotico's Blog

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Inspiration found in a friend...


Blog Posted:9/22/2012 2:02:00 PM

We all get inspired in different ways.. Could be a song or a movie or maybe just the way the wind blew today.. Well I was inspired to write this piece below by a wonderful poet and friend with dreams that connected our thoughts...hope you like it...  Michael


                                                   "Paradise Found"

                                           Walk with me into a paradise...
                                       Up steps to where hearts shall rise...

                                      Rhyming letters and strumming tunes...
                                       Flowing dreams like floating balloons...

                                        Floors of poems/love'>love with untouched peace...
                                   Where a poets world could drip with ease...

                                         Take a ride on this Ark of dreams...
                                   Over land to sea we connect like streams...


                                   inspired by ~Sukmawati Komala's~~ dreams..
                                                  now my dream too..

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Date: 9/28/2012 3:31:00 AM
thank you dear Mike...love to share with you and am honor so much with your excellent writes..i really enjoy your great work !!!<3<3<3 SK
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Date: 9/24/2012 8:59:00 PM
Hi Michael..I know about this dream of Sukma's and how much it means to her...We spoke about what each level of the Ark could mean and how it touched her life in such a dramatic way...How nice of u to write this in honor of her...Enjoyed!! gwendolen
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 9/28/2012 3:34:00 AM
dear sista..thank you so much for spending your valuable time to hear my share...and your descirption upon the dream is awesome and that means so much to me..am blessed to share with you <3<3<3oxoxox SK
Date: 9/23/2012 2:27:00 PM
lovely blog,,, xox~pd
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/23/2012 6:06:00 PM
Thanks PD Xox
Date: 9/23/2012 1:22:00 PM
I especially liked the 'Flowing dreams like floating ballons' Great, Great imagery.
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/23/2012 6:07:00 PM
Thank you Carol, I love playing with words. Xxxx
Date: 9/23/2012 11:52:00 AM
Yes sir my brother. That is book 2.
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Date: 9/23/2012 12:09:00 AM
What a beautiful poem Michael and thank you for bringing it to my attention I have not come across Sukmawati yet but I will now search her out, hugs Michael xx
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Sukmawati Komala
Date: 9/28/2012 3:46:00 AM
dear Mandy my golden angle..we do share each other in soup and am blessed to know you..<3<3<3 octopus hugs days and nights...luv you much ...:) SK
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/23/2012 6:20:00 AM
Yes Mandy, she is an amazing Poet... a dreamer just like myself and I'm sure many more......xxxx
Date: 9/22/2012 8:18:00 PM
Yes, I think this is the same poem I read earlier today. Lovely, Michael, and the title of your book is charming.
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/23/2012 6:17:00 AM
Yes it is the sam I posted yesterday, just wanted to bring more attention on how I was inspired... thanks, glad you like the book title...xxx
Date: 9/22/2012 7:47:00 PM
love it... nicely done, hugs cory
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Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/23/2012 6:15:00 AM
THanks Cory!!!
Date: 9/22/2012 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Sara!!! Inspiration is a wonderful thing that feeds the Soul.
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Date: 9/22/2012 5:01:00 PM
Yes she is Gail. As some many more on here that need to be recognized as well. Her dream she shared brought out this poem.
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Date: 9/22/2012 4:43:00 PM
Ahhh! I really like this one..Great work honoring a friend...Sara
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Date: 9/22/2012 2:46:00 PM
Join the Dream Soupers....
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Date: 9/22/2012 2:33:00 PM
@Arild~ The soup is a haw stack with many good needles and few bad.. we just have to keep reaching our hand in there and hope for poets like these... Still craving that Steak n Beer brother...
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Date: 9/22/2012 2:30:00 PM
Why thank you both for such sweet cmments... @Yassss~ you words on here and off here reflect nothing but beauty and "real" friendship. I treasure that...
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