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Zodiacs, Day of the Dead!?

Paradoxes perceived.... Alas, afore perditions peremptory paroxysms passing Recompense, aneath this incantations au revoirs pier?! Intensity wrought forth amid the speculums mist Surging slicing waves rolling in; brevitations acme ~ This cresendos apsis, imploding both place and time; time Sending forth a zephyrs horizontal vortex greeting unto, these assimilations.... Subsistences sumbliminal portals now weighing forlorns images; moribunds Sanguinary lineage, ill-poised at the gates of reapings; centuries they have sown!? Turpitudes brazen vizard standing tall and holding fast unto these Still, sacrilegious hexagons misconceiving beliefs; charmless fruits upon their vines Kwashiorkors bitter continuums in this state of morass', mummering morbid ways.... Alas, afore perditions peremptory paroxsyms passing Recompense, aneath this incantations au revoirs pier?! Cresendos apsis horizontal zephyrs vortex; assimilations twilight Greeting, augars ziggurat surging slicing waves, now rolling in ~ Brevitations ominous acme soon to forever pass this; Zodiacs.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ....Day of The Dead!?

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Shannon Deane

Date: 11/21/2011 5:45:00 AM

Breathtaking and stunning, beautifully penned words...as always a pleasure to read...luv shannon

Cecil Hickman

Date: 2/20/2011 11:35:00 AM

such deep and rich worded lines I also will have to relate to a dictionary for sure though I did enjoy reading your words, I always enjoy a challenge to read and understand words that I do not at first grasp,definitely a talented educated write,all the best to you in all that you do,,and Thank You for all your visits to my words,,Blessings..Cecil

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/19/2011 11:53:00 AM

My oh my I need a dictionary for some of these words John for me to totally understand this poem. Must be getting into the forgetful stage and need to up date my vocabulary and that is a good thing. God Bless Phyl.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/31/2011 12:09:00 PM

John, the extraordinary content of your work matches the vocab you use to deliver these poems...You know me, I'll tell you right off... I have a limited understanding with regards to some words here, nevertheless, I'll check the Dict./Thea. as this is very interesting....God bless you always. Hope all is well, my friend. Love, Annalise

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 1/27/2011 3:54:00 PM

extensive vocabulary, superb alliteration, and some memorable images, this poem has it all! and by the way, thank you for your kind words on my poems and for telling me about JeanMarie Marchese, I read some of her work and I agree she is a remarkable writer ~ smile ~

Steven Henderson

Date: 1/27/2011 3:15:00 PM

I so enjoyed reading your words this evening John. Thank you for sharing! Steve