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Your Smiling Face In Photoframe

Your smiling face with naughty eyes a photoframe in my reading room takes me back to old sweet days when time was always Spring in bloom. A photoframe in my reading room you are looking at me from years ago when time was always Spring in bloom adding paints to our new love's glow. You are looking at me from years ago when all the flowers just bloomed for us adding paints to our new love's glow a burst of colours on love-canvas. When all the flowers just bloomed for us we dreamt of dreams with open eyes a burst of colours on love-canvas the painting of a dream sunrise. We dreamt of dreams with open eyes but fate had something else it seemed the painting of a dream sunrise all those are now faded dreams. But fate had something else it seemed though you are smiling from photoframe all those are now faded dreams I know life will not be the same. Though you are smiling from photoframe a smile that I will forget never I know life will not be the same wish that smile glowed forever. A smile that I will forget never takes me back to old sweet days wish that smile glowed forever your smiling face with naughty eyes. © kash poet 2012 ============000============

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/15/2012 8:32:00 AM
A very sweet poem, Kash. You really such a great writer in those romance poems. Always delighted by your works.
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Date: 1/27/2012 6:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry. Good job. Best regards, Jon
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Date: 1/25/2012 9:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win for this wonderful piece, bl
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Date: 1/25/2012 8:47:00 PM
Kash, what a beautiful piece of work. So touching and full of emotion, a big congratulations on your big win, Greg
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:22:00 PM
YAYYY for you, Kash, you got a GREAT win with this cool poem, you pantoum king you!!! Congratulations.
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Date: 1/25/2012 9:08:00 AM
Such a beauty, Kash and I am not surprised to see this as a first rate win!! Congratulations to you!!
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Date: 1/25/2012 8:42:00 AM
congrats Kash on a brilliant first place win for this dynamic delight as only u can write my friend..luv..
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Francine's ""4 forms 4 themes" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/25/2012 1:44:00 AM
Kash congrats on your well deserved 1st place, great form..David
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Date: 1/24/2012 10:18:00 PM
Very nice and touching. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/24/2012 10:10:00 PM
This is sooo sweet and speaks divinely of a lost love..I can feel the sense of loss from this write. It penetrates so deep in each and every line. A wonderful first place gem, Kash. Gwendolen
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Date: 1/24/2012 9:55:00 PM
i knew this would be a topper, kashi, souer congrats on your no.1 win... more, more,,:) huggs!
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Date: 1/24/2012 9:08:00 PM
congrats on your first place win with this Pantoum Kash, just beautiful
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Date: 1/22/2012 8:12:00 AM
bittersweet colorful word play and visual language, kashi buddy! .. love it all, especially the last line! huggs for a win! ;)
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Date: 1/21/2012 2:11:00 AM
wow, i can see the technique you've shown here is quite mastery stuff kash. i love the going back and forth flow of this poem. good luck on the contest
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Date: 1/20/2012 11:24:00 PM
kash, you will have to tell me your last name again (your son's) I forgot it and I think I deleted the soupmail about him posting a poem here. Goodnight now, Kash. SEe ya tomorrow.
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Date: 1/20/2012 10:48:00 PM
Kash, I say it again, you are a pantoum king!! The style really suits you and I am amazed how well you do with your English in this form. I hope FRancine likes this one a lot. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/20/2012 5:05:00 PM
Wonderful piece of smile from photo frame, loved and enjoyed. Best wishes for the contest, bl
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Date: 1/20/2012 3:11:00 PM
I'm glad you made clear that this is not your own story, as it would be too sad to think it. Wow...you never cease to surprise me with your many facets of beautiful poetry. ( or with your kind help on my own writes....once again, I owe you for pointing out my poem was longer than the contest rules!...It reminds me how careless I become, when I am in too big a rush to post. Thank you dear friend! :) This is a beauty....it should do well, GOOD LUCK!!
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Date: 1/20/2012 1:32:00 PM
outstanding Kash, best of luck..David
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Date: 1/20/2012 12:26:00 PM
Interesting..good luck in the contest..pd
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Date: 1/20/2012 12:15:00 PM
A very nice example of the form...I enjoyed reading it. Good work! And good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/20/2012 10:53:00 AM
Not My story......
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