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Your Ray (For Adeleke's Contest)

Ray of sunshine peers provocatively out of the misty gray
Be assured your fervent feelings I will not betray
Thank you for confirming that love lives to find a way
Thank you for opening your happy heart to me today
Thank you for keeping my foolish fears at bay
Thank you for finally freeing my soul of its dismay
Thank you for striving my sadness to allay
Thank you for responses, replies without delay
Thank you for healing hurts that heavily weigh
Thank you for not tearing or toying with my heart in play
Thank you cannot completely express all I wish to say
Thank you seems such a simple, understated way to convey
Your gifts are so stunning, a brilliant bouquet
The joy I have found from you, your sunshine, your ray
 

For Adeleke’s “Through… thoughtful and thankful” contest

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/7/2010 7:13:00 AM Nicely done, Carolyn. Full of gratitude in these thank you p oems, and I hope you do well. Have a nice day (mine is gonna be long and I hope i can get thru it!) Luv , andrea Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 9/6/2010 9:24:00 PM Hey Carolyn this one is real great. Your end is alwayssuperb. Thanks for your comments. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 9/6/2010 6:23:00 PM thank you for writing this wonderful poem, Harry Login to Reply

Hyle Chu Date: 9/6/2010 2:27:00 AM Good luck in the contest, Carolyn. Good one. Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 9/5/2010 9:13:00 AM Thankyou for being my friend,sweet sunshine ray!hope ur better,lovely poem,lovely as you,hugs Celene. Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 9/5/2010 6:22:00 AM Good luck in the contest with this fine write Carolyn >> James Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 9/5/2010 6:07:00 AM A great entry and a sure winner from such a beautiful loving poet.... very, very enjoyed..Luv Michael Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 9/5/2010 5:25:00 AM Good Sunday morning dear Carolyn ! What a fine poem my friend to read on a sunny Sunday morning ! Thankful and joy go so hand in hand...wouldn't you agree ! *smiles* "Thank you" for igniting my day !! much love, james Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 9/4/2010 11:41:00 AM Cool Job yo've done on this one! Carolyn! I haven't gotten around to doing one for this contest yet. Agape, Moses Check E-Mail in a moment! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 9/4/2010 8:21:00 AM Thanks for commenting on my blog I think you did a fantastic job in writing this poem, I found it very difficult, mine took me hours to write, looking up words and such, best of luck in the contest.. love Constance Login to Reply

Raj Nandy Date: 9/4/2010 6:23:00 AM Sorry , spelling corrections ; "LORD" & "CAROLYN" - in my previous comments please! Thanks , - Raj Login to Reply

Raj Nandy Date: 9/4/2010 6:20:00 AM 'COUNT YOUR BLESSINGS , SAVE THEM ONE BY ONE , AND YOU WILL BE SUPRISED TO SEE WHAT THE lORD HAS DONE !' A NICE POEM CAROYN ! Thank you for all your kind comments on my poems ! Best wishes always , - Raj Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/4/2010 12:23:00 AM What an enchanting write Carolyn, you sure captured the essence of being thankful in your piece, sometimes when I sulk I forget the many blessings and things to be thankful for. Thanks for the reminder my friend.. Enjoy your weekend, love Wilma Login to Reply

Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 9/3/2010 11:12:00 PM What an enchanting beauty in this lovely write. Like the lovely ray of sunshine it shines keep rolling from beginning till end. Very uplifting Poem My good wishes for its contest success. Many thanks for your precious comments on Patradoot. There was confusion in my expression. My father's colleagues became ministers not my father. He had left active politics when India got freedom in 1947, while his companions were busy in securing power & pelf and became ministers. Love best wishes Ravindra Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/3/2010 6:57:00 PM Very wonderful entry to the contest. Good luck, Carolyn Login to Reply

Lucinda Bulger Date: 9/3/2010 1:58:00 PM Girl, what rhyme and time you have olay!!!!! JK lady, have only been posting, not commenting many for many monthes dear one, I miss you sooooo much! :) :) Things are purdy good, I left two projects in the dust, but good news is, I was crying to go back to the home I left when I was 16, I was blessed to find a special serenity in the wilderness. Praise God for the sanctity He gives with such graceful, loving, merciful hands! You must know I felt this write. it bugs me when friendship is cut-off. Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 9/3/2010 10:45:00 AM Thanks for this fine poem. I've a bit of catching up to do in the next few days. Have a good weekend. Love, Dave Login to Reply

Susan Palli Date: 9/3/2010 10:27:00 AM Good job! So touching Login to Reply