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Your Clueless About My Cherished Love

This is getting out of hand My heart needs to understand How it can try and bear To fit one more ounce of care That is coming straight from you Helping myself pull right through The days of sadness and hurt When loves would always desert Me without a single warning As the day were badly turning Into hopeless ones that must Give me reasons not to trust Anyone else for a while Till I saw your charming smile And eyes that would melt right through The layers of being blue Giving me hope once again Every time your heart would send All the care and happiness So I feel nothing less Than knowing you are the one And my new life has begun As I'm lying next to you Without having any clue That you changed my life for good Like a true love always should

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Chris Boskovski

Date: 1/30/2014 11:10:00 PM

Wow Robin what a powerful write you produced! A brilliant write, you have a lot of good imagery! Great job Robin! :) xoxo hugs

Cherl Dunn

Date: 1/30/2014 9:15:00 PM

Bravo brilliant love this so much honesty thanks for sharing something so positive with romance and hopeful for others have lost that feeling my friend. cheri

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2014 5:26:00 PM

Ahh!! Great expressive work..Passionate as well..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2014 4:17:00 PM

How could anyone ever be clueless with your beautiful words of poetry being said to them! Nice one, Robin.

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/29/2014 11:37:00 PM

Another nicely written piece. However, in your title, replace "your" with either "you're" or "you are". Either one of those choices would prove to be more appropriate.