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An hommage  to Rudyard Kipling's poem "If", done in the same style.

If you can make it through each day Unconcerned with what others say, If you can take the time to play But get your work done, come what may. If you win having never fought And mend the bridges time has tore Or be content with what you've got And very rarely ask for more; If you can make a house a home And properly raise children too If you can stay and never roam And do it cause it's what you do. If you can speak ill of no one Cause gossip's not worth repeating, Or stick to a task till it's done And never think of retreating; If you can keep your life savings And not risk it on a gamble, And avoid expensive cravings And allow your friends to ramble. If you can force yourself to cope And do what it takes to survive, And live on little more than hope And the will which keeps you alive; If you can hold your head up high Or stoop to help the poor and such, If you seek truth and not a lie If you can heal with a mere touch, If you can be mother and wife And still, find time for God above, Yours is the Earth and a good life, And what is more, you will know love! (Rhyme) 3/3/2015

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Date: 5/26/2018 7:32:00 PM
Charming, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/7/2015 2:40:00 PM
Emile, Congrats on your win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 7/7/2015 7:10:00 PM
Thanks Linda, your comments are always welcome. Emile.
Date: 7/6/2015 9:36:00 PM
Emile, :) Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest. Love **SKAT**
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/7/2015 9:40:00 AM
Thanks SKAT, I appreciate the opportunity. Emile.
Date: 3/3/2015 10:19:00 PM
Wisdom worth heeding in your elocution Emile, splendidly expressed! 7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/4/2015 8:45:00 AM
Thanks, for taking the time to read and comment on my poem, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 3/3/2015 7:07:00 PM
a very fine tribute to Kipling my friend "If" is my favourite poem and you definitely have done his wonderful poem full justice adding this to my favourites hugs 7
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/4/2015 8:46:00 AM
Thanks Shadow, for this vote of confidence and encouragement. Emile.

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