You Take My Breath Away

effortless and free my sensuous love for thee a rapture of souls..... _______________________

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/11/2010 4:28:00 PM

Great short write about that special love between two lovers...or that special love...Keep the creative pen flowing..If for the contest should do well, good luck..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 5/11/2010 3:33:00 AM

Concise and powerful Rick ! I'll be looking forward to reading more of your writes ! james

James Fraser

Date: 5/10/2010 2:48:00 PM

Simply beautiful Rick, all the best in the Constance's contest >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/9/2010 12:16:00 PM

Thank you for your comments and good luck in this contest. i haven't entered this one as yet. Too much company today for Mother's Day. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/9/2010 5:24:00 AM

It truly is "rapture" when love comes so effortlessly, Rick. Great senryu. Love, Carolyn