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You Don'T Have To Be That Way

I've said it once and I'll say it again I HATE IT! The drinking and smoking. I doesn't just kill you it kills me too I love you and you have no idea how hard it is to see you this way You mean so much You mean too much and seeing you take every last drop makes me want cry you make life for yourself hard as hard as it could get it could be better you have what it takes to stop i know you do if you can't i know what will. love care ME i could help you don't have to be that way you are so much better

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/9/2009 12:00:00 PM
Hits home hard. Very good write. Julie
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Date: 8/9/2009 10:55:00 AM
It is Sunday afternoon here and I am so happy to share this time reading your fantastic poetry Johneta. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/8/2009 5:26:00 PM
Heart felt pain for one committing slow suicide. Sara
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