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you could be my poetry that power inside my hand my inspirations my final stand i can see you clearly in my hearts eyes and i care so dearly that love can not be denied you could be my poetry that pain inside my heart killing me ever so slowly tearing me apart but what is love without the pain, punishment or distruction you could never be too sure of love even with instructions you could be my poetry my gift from God all my signs point to you isn't it quite odd my day dreams are all of you and never anyone else i just dream of having you just you and no one else

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Date: 8/2/2010 1:49:00 PM
one person can be another's enitre life. great write. & thanks for your funny comments.. take care John. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 8/2/2010 8:35:00 AM
Great write that should delight the person that was the object of your love and light..Sara
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Date: 7/31/2010 5:50:00 PM
that title could go either way on Mrs. Blaize
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Date: 7/30/2010 5:53:00 PM
sweet poem, enjoyed reading!
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Date: 7/30/2010 3:33:00 AM
A lovely write John. I totally agree with the second stanza. Always, Farah
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Date: 7/30/2010 12:17:00 AM
She is a lucky lady,John,to day dream about her,beautiful John John!Celene!
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Date: 7/29/2010 9:51:00 PM
An romantic write on a romantic wish. Bed time it is getting late and I work tomorrow. Enjoyed catching up on your poems tonight. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/29/2010 6:27:00 PM
Beautiful write, the stuff that dreams are made off..
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Date: 7/29/2010 5:43:00 PM
/Gosh, this is so beautiful. Shes a lucky lady...thank you for your kind comment on my poem. BG
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Date: 7/29/2010 3:57:00 PM
Beautiful.. just beautiful, beautiful truth. Thank you for gracing my mind with such fine literature ~~Alex(:
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