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You Are My Love - Monchielle

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~You Are My Love~ (Monchielle) You are my one true love And in you I can trust Carry you deep in heart You're always in my thoughts My love can never part. You are my one true love Each day from morn to nite I always think of you You make my life worthwhile I know your love is true. You are my one true love For you would do anything Each day you give me hope And my heart you make whole With you I always cope. You are my one true love You mean the world to me And want to live for you With you I have it all You love me,I do too. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 January.20.2015

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/21/2015 11:16:00 AM

An epitome of romance with a nice flow of feelings, Dorian

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/21/2015 12:38:00 PM

Hi Dr. Ram ! Thank you so much for visiting me and leaving me such a wonderful comment. I appreciate it a lot my dear friend!Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/21/2015 7:50:00 AM

Hi D. Loved this "You love me,I do too"Huggs!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/21/2015 12:41:00 PM

Hello Rajat! My dearest friend thank you so kindly for visiting and leaving me such a wonderful comment. I appreciate it a lot you're always so sweet and nice to me. Have a very lovely day! God bless you Rajat! :) Love and hugs! xoxxxox D. ^O^

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/21/2015 5:37:00 AM

Sincerity of a love that has its roots fixed deep into a tender heart! A seven, dear Dorian!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/21/2015 12:33:00 PM

Hi Demetrios! My dearest friend thank you so much for visiting me and leaving me such a wonderful comment. I appreciate it a lot you're always so kind and sweet to me! Have a very lovely day! God bless you Demetrios! :) Love and hugs! xoxxox D. ^O^

Leon Enriquez

Date: 1/20/2015 4:05:00 PM

Dear Dorian: Lovely write. Lovely read. Simply lovely. All my best wishes to you my friend. Please take a look at my poem "Salute" which is for you. Enjoy! Leon

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/21/2015 5:00:00 AM

Hi Leon! Thank you so much for visiting me and leaving me such a wonderful comment. I appreciate it a lot my very dear friends! Ok I will take a look and read it . Thanks you're very sweet of you my friend. Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^

Shane Cooper

Date: 1/20/2015 3:25:00 PM

Such beautiful simple verse conveying such depthof emotion. A perfect peice of writing. Thank you. love Shane xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/21/2015 5:06:00 AM

Hi Shane! Thank you so much for visiting me and leaving me such a wonderful comment. I appreciate it a lot my very dear friend! Thanks you're very kind my dear friend.. Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^

Gary Bateman

Date: 1/20/2015 2:02:00 PM

By the way "D" -- I was away from my computer and I just saw the photos you attached in the note area!! WOW!! You are truly fantastic with your selection of photos. I bore everyone with my Author's Notes (Ho-Hum), but you make it all so grand with your photos. Anyway, I just wanted you know that the photos and images you post with your poetry are spot-on, that is, truly marvelous!! All The Best, Gary XOXOXO

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/21/2015 5:17:00 AM

Hi there again my dearest friend Gary! Oh the images yes, I am very glad you noticed them I thought you already knew about the images I always try to select carefully and attach them with each of my poems. So glad that you like my choices here. Thanks again! Maybe once in while you should try to add at least an image alongside your notes in the note box, you can do both you know that. Thank you for all! All the best to you too! See you around! Have a beautiful day! :) Love and hugs! XXXOXXOX D. ^O^

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/20/2015 1:21:00 PM

true to form and filled with lyrical imagery, dorian.. love becomes you!.. a gem of a piece.. hugggs

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/21/2015 1:47:00 AM

Hi Nette! Thank you so much for visiting me and leaving me such a wonderful comment. I appreciate it a lot my very dear friend! Have a very lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^

Gary Bateman

Date: 1/20/2015 1:19:00 PM

Hello "D" -- You have definitely sold me on your very beautiful rhyme write here my dear one!! This one's a Big 7 easily and is definitely going in my FAV file. The simplicity of the verse with the types of words you've used, matched with rhyme, is perfect. Very Well-Done "D"!! Best Always, Gary XOXOXO (BTW, Be sure to check out my latest rhyme poem that I posted just before yours. It's a "dark theme," but I had to do at least one for the New Year. (My wife doesn't like it, but that's poetry!!)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/20/2015 4:36:00 PM

"Hello there Gary so nice to see you again! Thank you so much for your very wonderful visit and comment my very dearest friend. I appreciate it so much, always do as you must know by now. And thanks a lot for the 7 and the fav! Very happy to know that I sold you on this one. lol.. You're always so sweet and kind to me. Have a very lovely day! God bless you always! And yes, about that very awesome dark poem latest of yours I'll come officially to read it. How can I resist it coming from you and a before Halloween that will be a treat to me :) lol..ha, ha,.. Thank you for all! Don't forget to give my love to Ingrid! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! XXXOXOXXOX D. ^0^ " "

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/20/2015 1:19:00 PM

a beautiful and loving write...very romantic.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/21/2015 12:36:00 PM

Hi ML! My dear friend thank you so much for visiting me and leaving me such a wonderful comment. I appreciate so much. Have a very lovely day! God bless you! :) Love and hugs! xoxxox D. ^O^