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You Are Mine

Metallic is the taste that burns my throat but your demise is what ruins my soul. Each of your viscous bleeding tears scar me like lava, always burning, the cost of who I am. Endless time, you continue turning, I count each beat of my cold dead heart, the warmth of you, your blood will impart as your pulsing vein sates my yearning. Your beautiful throat smooth and long beneath my lips, moans of ecstasy whisper your willing desire. Now, you are mine ...forever. 09/06/16

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Date: 9/16/2016 12:41:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine first place win James! ; ) 7
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James Inman
Date: 9/16/2016 1:04:00 PM
Thank you Connie.
Date: 9/9/2016 3:32:00 PM
Your have met the challenge so well with this deep and dark write, James. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
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James Inman
Date: 9/11/2016 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, I wish I could find the time to read some more of them.
Date: 9/9/2016 1:11:00 PM
Great! Congratulations!
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James Inman
Date: 9/11/2016 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 9/9/2016 12:10:00 PM
Truly dark and chilly, James! A challenge excellently tackled! Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul
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James Inman
Date: 9/11/2016 1:20:00 PM
Thank you for the nice comment and for taking your time to read my poem Paul.
Date: 9/9/2016 10:53:00 AM
James, congratulations on your win in my contest with this chilling and beautifully penned poem and I am loving the layout too~
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James Inman
Date: 9/11/2016 1:18:00 PM
Thank you BW. Things have been crazy for me lately but please know I appreciate the time you take to host your contests. Thank you again.
Date: 9/9/2016 7:40:00 AM
James, well done dear friend, knew it would place high...congrats on your top placement! :)-luloo
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James Inman
Date: 9/11/2016 1:17:00 PM
Thank you so much Laura. I haven't had time to read most of the other entries yet, hopefully soon.
Date: 9/7/2016 8:48:00 AM
so beautiful James..you are so gifted! "Now you are mine forever"...so expressively beautiful, good luck but you don't need it! :)-luloo
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James Inman
Date: 9/7/2016 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Laura, you are so sweet.

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