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Yellow Star---Neurological Disorder

A yellow star not of sky A yellow star I buy Yellow star whose meaning is atrocious Yellow star whose meaning and poetry I notice Yellow star whose books like lard whose unbelievable bulls???t Yellow star

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2016 12:31:00 AM

Shoel Blow,, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry XOX ~LINDA~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/26/2010 10:23:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shoel. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/26/2010 5:48:00 AM

Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..interesting ..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 3/25/2010 5:18:00 PM

very nice loved it and welcome to poetry soup well done faleshia