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Yellow Rose

Approaching her now
The yellow rose behind me
Ran out of red ones
My heart is throbbing through me
Will yellow mean something here

Placed in her hand now
Slumbering daintily on
Her fingertip bed
Cupid's tear drop flows onto
My hand binding us for good

© 2013 Rick Zablocki

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/18/2015 12:24:00 PM
Rick, thanks for the stunning write. A bit too bright, but I love it. FOREVER **SKAT**
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Date: 4/12/2013 6:55:00 AM
An excellent 2-pc TANKA Rick. I especially like the way the last 2 lines flow together... beautifully stated! Keith
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Date: 4/11/2013 4:29:00 PM
Love it ;}
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Date: 4/10/2013 5:22:00 PM
Wow.......another side to you, I love the romantic part of this poem!!Beautifully done, Rick!!
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Date: 4/10/2013 2:56:00 PM
very sweet one!!
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Date: 4/10/2013 10:58:00 AM
i sense happiness in a yellow rose... enjoyed your write Rick,... p.d.
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Date: 4/10/2013 6:56:00 AM
beautiful Rick xx
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Date: 4/10/2013 6:48:00 AM
This is an awesome binding write Rick! You have painted an illustrious image, one that I have visualized very nicely! I loved reading this incredible poem this morning! What an amazingly sentimental piece, Great Work!!
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