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Write This Way

They tell my heart to be realistic, Yet my soul is dying to be artistic, The stress and pain makes me delirious, I'd rather not take things so serious, While the truth of life cannot be ignored, Without a little fun I would get bored, So why not let your worries fly free, And get lost in my world of fantasy.

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 1/31/2019 2:58:00 PM

Love the melody and the message of this poem, great job!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/1/2019 9:30:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poem. I'm so glad you enjoyed it Timothy :)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 1/28/2019 9:58:00 PM

Already lost in your world of fantasy :) Great write reflecting your wishes. :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 3/1/2019 9:23:00 PM

Thanks for reading! I really appreciate your kind comments on this poem :)

Eve Roper

Date: 1/28/2019 7:17:00 PM

I'll join you and get lost in my world of fantasy. Enjoyed reading Hugs Eve

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/26/2019 9:47:00 PM

So glad you enjoyed this one Eve ... Thanks for reading :)

James Inman

Date: 1/28/2019 12:31:00 PM

Clever and playful Kelly.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/26/2019 9:30:00 PM

Many thanks James :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 1/28/2019 7:58:00 AM

Great write Kelly, showing some really great rhyme. Trust all well with you, Blessings,Gordon

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/26/2019 9:21:00 PM

Many thanks Gordon ... Yes, all is well here and I hope the same is true for you my friend :)

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/28/2019 4:31:00 AM

no one can ignore the life of truth...// its beautiful poem

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/21/2019 11:17:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments on this poem. I appreciate them very much :)

Robin Davis

Date: 12/31/2013 11:49:00 PM

Kelly This is an amusing, cute, clever, fun, and interesting write. We all could use some fantasy and escape from reality once in a while. Am I invited next time you plan one of these trips. LOL Thanks for the amazing comment on my Raped poem. Hugs

Kelly Deschler
Date: 1/2/2014 4:38:00 PM

Thank you very much, Robin! And, you would be welcome anytime! LOL! :)

Litan Dey

Date: 11/10/2013 11:25:00 AM

Love the wining work with free thoughts...Have a good day

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/9/2013 10:45:00 PM

Hi Kelly, love this winning poem from you.... congrats... I'm holding that one ((you know what)) for this coming week... heheh,can't wait to post it.... goodnight my friend... LINDA