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Would He....If I Were!!

Would he, If I were be there for me Would he , If I were really care for me Would he, If I were ever hurt me Would he, If I were soon desert me Would he, If I were make demands of me Would he, If I were take a stand with me Would he, If I were walk out on me Would he, If I were hit or shout at me Would he, If I were try to comfort me Would he, If I were simply run from me Would he, If I were blame it all on me Would he, If I were take the fall with me Would he, If I were soon betray me Would he, If I were grow to hate me Would he, If I were kindly hold me Would he If I were take is slowly Would he If I were run away and hide Would he, If I were simply force himself to cry Would he, If I were take responsibility Responsibility...would he take Would he, If I were face reality Would he? Would.... he? If I Were....

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Date: 1/8/2009 11:17:00 PM
Yes, great piece of Work this is. well done and welcome to poertysoup please read, comment on any my poems and thank you for the comments.
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Date: 1/5/2009 6:13:00 AM
Hi Tyesha! Welcome to PoetrySoup and thank you for all those lovely comments. I feel you have asked deeply important and emotional questions here. The repetition strongly enhances just how powerful these answers will be to you. Well done and good luck. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/4/2009 5:04:00 PM
wow, dramatic and deep and ask a question and makes you wonder huh? enjoyed reading it. Dont laugh at my poem BABYS....
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Date: 1/4/2009 5:44:00 AM
Hi Tyesha - Another deeply personal poem - Your strength in revealing who you are and expressing your heart & soul is truly a gift - Don't ever let anyone lay hands on you - life's way to short to let folk beat on you Great poem - God Bless, MJ p.s. you should read some of my friend Sharon's work for she is in a class all her own
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