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Inspired by Geroge Orwell's book, 1984
It was a bright cold morning when I was born, into a world of perpetual war. I lived in the city of Worldarium; once a beautiful place but now reduced to ruin, buildings in decay, glass windows broken. Poverty, hunger, disease killed. This was a remnant of what the world used to be, Worldarium was like a marine aquarium where, The Infinite Mind, watched; we were the rats of society in this reduced existence, there were the Uppidity Ups who lived in sky high buildings of glass and steel. The Servers, who worked as servants for the Uppidity Ups, all the bridges has been destroyed and all the ways of escape gone; yet there was a resistance group who believed that somewhere beyond, Worldarium existed a Utopia. So, I grew up a beautiful, lost girl. I dreamed of this nirvana place. When I was a young woman I met, Gideon, a man who became my lover and who was part of the resistance; there was an evil man called Strong Arm, who was the enforcer, if a person "rat" went against The Infinite Mind, the result- torture, death. Gideon came to me one day and told me he had found a way out, he said, come with me and we will find Utopia together; so when night fell we started walking across what was once an ocean, but we were caught by Strong Arm's, Army of Servants and taken. I never saw Gideon again, I assume he had been executed, and I was kept in a glass tower, a sex slave of Strong Arm; I gave birth to children and my only gift was that they would never, know poverty, hunger or disease but only life in a glass tower. The year I was taken, 2017 . . . ____________________________ March 7, 2017 Prose Poetry/Worldarium, 2017 Copyright Protected, ID 882689 1984 or 2017 Contest Debbie Guzzi Sixth Place

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Date: 4/7/2017 7:49:00 AM
Oh that is so very bleak. A nice take on the theme.
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Date: 4/2/2017 10:22:00 AM
Like the Orwellian nightmare you've created - and love the aquarium metaphor. Congratulations on your win BW! :-)
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Date: 4/1/2017 8:13:00 PM
Back to congratulate?you , awesome
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Date: 4/1/2017 7:06:00 PM
Your poem gave me goosebumps. Great job, and congrats on your placement.
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Date: 4/1/2017 5:37:00 PM
Diamond #6 DEARHEART! I would have never guessed this was you, what a great surprise. Please do jump on board with my next contest BRAVE NEW WORLD. Light & Love
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Date: 3/30/2017 6:46:00 PM
Very nice, Broken Wings, you made me feel the action and the emotion in the story... Good luck in the contest... ~*
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Date: 3/8/2017 6:39:00 PM
This just shows how wise you are indeed. Sounds like you see with keen vision and you are so creative to boot. Many thanks for the brief description of what we are heading towards after all. What a strange place, after all. Best regards!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2017 10:35:00 AM
Duke thanks for visiting and for the compliment ~
Date: 3/7/2017 2:20:00 PM
Great raise my hackles fiction :)
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2017 10:32:00 AM
Maureen thanks for visiting my poem!

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