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World War 11 Through the Eyes of My Dad Poem No 2 of Trilogy

WORLD WAR 11 THROUGH THE EYES OF MY DAD POEM NO 2 OF TRILOGY My father was one of six children, whose family Had no financial reserves, so explained to them amicably That he had decided he wanted to apply to join the war, He had no other reason other than he needed to be a soldier He was eighteen, did not have to be any older, But he was told after his medical, sorry mate, you have flat feet, So big deal, said my Dad, I want for my country to fight, Do you think flat feet would deter my ability, It is only right Please pass my test and say yes , so they put him into the tanks Division which for my Dad was the beginning of joining the ranks Of thousands of soldiers but soon made good friends Many of whom he lost during this long vicious war, Most certainly close to a score! He was posted down South to Italy, Egypt and the Sahara Although many battles were fought, He was hurt badly naught. Had to hold one of his friends hand, whose leg was blown off He was dying, take my dog tag and give it to my wife, his cough Was bad, his voice hardly discernible, blood everywhere, he died, This for my Dad was the worst day of his life, And he was dreading meeting and telling Joyce his wife. World War 11 continued year after year, One sunny beautiful day whilst in the Egypt, sirens were heard, Eight men to a tank but the foot soldiers had nowhere to hide, Or take cover, bombs started dropping, this was no time for pride They, jumped into the tanks and more and even more, Suddenly there was a hush, no more bombing , soldiers Shouting gleefully it was all over, they were being bombed A mistake by their own people, so they didn’t respond This often happened during the war, they literally poured Out of my Dad’s tank twenty or more soldiers, order was restored The Nazis were almost on their doorstep, an air raid was about To take place, how many more would die, like playing Russian roulette Their brows, their necks, their shirts, all wet from fear and sweat Their duty to protect the Suez Canal , North Africa became a battleground, With the help of Americans, the French and even South Africans, The Allies triumphed with sheer mass, not only over 900 tanks Involved, but immense sea and air power – many thousands died, And wives, sisters, mothers and daughters cried. The Germans were slowly forced back by the Allies moving back up North, Until Victory reigned and the end of the war declared. The Germans retreated, to fight back they wouldn’t have dared! In October 1944 Greece was liberated by the British troops They marched proudly down the main street, and at the back, a Tall, tanned, handsome soldier noticed a beautiful young Greek woman, Their eyes met for a brief second, it was my mum, her heart Missed a beat, How could they ever meet!

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Date: 8/20/2020 12:38:00 PM
Jennifer, this is amazing story telling and family legacy. Make sure this is preserved for your family. I read your comment about your grandfather's poems being lost - a sad regret. WWII is becoming more and more ancient history and needs to be archived. Love this!
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Date: 7/19/2020 7:36:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your father Jennifer. Wonderfully penned. A love story begins. You need to write chapter 2. I loved it! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 7/26/2020 7:03:00 AM
There is a 3rd and final episode I posted about a week ago, that reveals all. Pity my aunt lost all my grandfathers poems because he wrote many about the war but she never shared them and now they are gone forever. Thank-you for your wonderful support and lovely comment dear friend. Be safe and well. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 7/18/2020 12:19:00 PM
You've documented your beginning...and certainly remembered the experience of your father...finally meeting your Mom...
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:58:00 AM
But what happens next - next episode reveals all. Thank you dear friend - don't leave your pizza lying around, remember the aroma floats all the way across the pond, you might lose it again. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 7/18/2020 1:27:00 AM
This is absolutely wonderful. You are just the best storyteller. I felt myself in the story. Blessings Jennifer. Phred
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:54:00 AM
Thank-you Phred - yes I am a bit of a story teller, others do say the same to me. I' happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 7/15/2020 11:17:00 AM
My father was rejected from service because he was color blind, Jennifer. Your dad and mine were members of the "Greatest Generation." They were survivors who made it through the Depression. It's wonderful that your father was able to give you so much information about the war. Your tribute is very well penned!
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:52:00 AM
Thank-you so much Caroline - your comment is really awesome and touching. What a co-incidence that both our Fathers were first rejected, but fought and still managed to stay alive. Stay well and safe my friend. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer
Date: 7/15/2020 7:31:00 AM
Awesome tribute, Jennifer--and a splendid recall of history. Sweet ending.
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:47:00 AM
Thank-you Vijay - I'm glad you enjoyed my WW 11 poems. I'm also glad I put it down in writing for myself to keep. Blessings and hugs my friend. Jennifer.
Date: 7/14/2020 3:40:00 PM
Wow! Touching in so many ways! A great story!
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:37:00 AM
Thank-you dear Kim - you are always such a sweetheart with your comments. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer
Date: 7/14/2020 10:21:00 AM
WoW! What a great surprise ending to this story. The war was indeed a horrible experience but at the end a wonderful surprise. LOVE IT! Super write my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:34:00 AM
Thank you Judy a lovely,sweet comment - the real surprise in in my last episode of the trilogy. Take care and be safe. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer
Date: 7/14/2020 4:43:00 AM
Epic write dear Jenn...your writes are very intriguing...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:31:00 AM
Thank-you Wingster, I do like approaching poetry a little differently, - I enjoy writing about life. I think yours are awesome and really all so well crafted and sophisticated. Blessings and hugs dear friend, Jennster
Date: 7/14/2020 1:43:00 AM
Wow Jennifer, i've read of many a couple and their first ever meet, but this has to beat them all. The poetry is brilliant, and so is his story, a record of a war, needs to be archived for posterity.
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:43:00 AM
An awesome comment, thank-you Harry, love your comment. Guess I was lucky that we spoke about it quite a bit as I also did with my grandfather. That is another poem I will write one day when in the early 1930's there was unrest and all the Greeks and my grandparents and my mother as a child had to flee Turkey in the still of night, some were not so lucky. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 7/12/2020 4:38:00 PM
Enjoyed the narrative… Glad your dad got out alive... Here's to V-Day! :) gw
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:14:00 AM
So am I Gershon, friends say I look a lot like him but my son has his kind and gentle nature. Blessings thank you for a great comment! Jennifer.
Date: 7/12/2020 1:28:00 PM
Wonderful story, a time of war not thinking love to be involved. My husband of 20 years only mention a couple of incidents of war. I wish he would have wrote down his memories to be carried on. But I hear many soldiers keep time of war locked up in a vault in their minds. Stay well. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:12:00 AM
Hi Eve, I was fascinated by the stories they both told me in fact, I should have actually written a 4th poem, WW 11 through my grandfathers eyes as he was a poet, and sadly my aunt did not want to share his poems with us and after her death all his poems, except the few he sent me, were lost. A lovely comment, stay well my friend, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 7/11/2020 7:52:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … quite a story indeed with the highs and lows that go with war time. Memories like you have written should never be lost with time and thankfully you are preserving your Dad's - thank you so much Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 7/26/2020 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Lindsay, both my parents spoke to me because I was always asking, I just felt horrified at what they had to go through. I wonder if they know what the world is going through now, equally if not more horrific as we can't see our enemy or hear anything, only the media talking about the millions of cases and the over half a million deaths. Be safe dear friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 7/11/2020 4:04:00 PM
You've certainly done your dad proud Jennifer with your verse. I enjoyed reading it. Hope you're well Tom
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Date: 7/26/2020 5:59:00 AM
Thank-you Tom, I hope he knows - my Dad was very special. All well - be safe thoughts to you and the family from across the pond my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.

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