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- A poem for children -

It smells rain, and gray blue clouds gets heavy "I don't worry" - (kitten meowing complaining ) - "don't ask me" Most cats hate water - unpleasant and ain't friendly "I'm more than just ready", says Freddy Kelly, Peggy, Eddie and I will splash water like confetti When everyone is wet in to the skin, yummy time with jelly .... but, when evening comes I will curl up with the cat Olley 06/09/2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Free Verse or Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Eve Roper photo 1 3rd place in the contest

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Date: 9/11/2019 3:44:00 PM
Sunshine, congratulations on your win … thank you so much for participating in my contest. Hugs Eve
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2019 4:09:00 AM
- Thank you for my placement on your winners list, Eve - A pleasure to participate :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/9/2019 5:09:00 PM
So cute! CONGRATS on your placement, Anne-Lise. Janice
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Date: 9/13/2019 4:08:00 AM
- Thanks for the congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/9/2019 3:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Sunshine. Well done.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/13/2019 4:07:00 AM
- Thanks for the congratulations, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/9/2019 1:57:00 PM
Nice write Anne-Lise. You used a nice rhythm and imagery to paint a wonderful feeling of home. Congratulations placing Anne-Lise. Trevor
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/9/2019 2:00:00 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Trevor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2019 3:15:00 PM
Perfect Love, Panagiota
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2019 3:21:00 PM
- Playing in the rain ... many thanks for your visit and your comment, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2019 1:37:00 PM
what a fun poem Anne-Lise good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/6/2019 2:43:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Jan - Large amounts of rain today ... made me think of my childhood ... outside whatever the weather :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2019 11:24:00 AM
Sweet Poem Anne-Lise! I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 9/6/2019 11:29:00 AM
- Thanks, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2019 10:55:00 AM
Cats certainly know where its cosy and warm, just follow the cat. Good luck and have a nice weekend. Tom
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Date: 9/6/2019 11:00:00 AM
- I didn't care about the rain when I was a kid - I loved being outdoors, no matter what the weather was like :) - Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2019 10:00:00 AM
Very sweet, SS. Reminds me of when I was a child, rain came seldom, and we all put on our bathing suits to go play in it.
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Date: 9/6/2019 11:04:00 AM
- We often had rain ... but, we always played outside - Made "chocolate cake" of soil and water ... decorated with fine stones or flowers :) - Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2019 8:27:00 AM
I like your interpretation of that photo..a fun read, indeed..all the best, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 9/6/2019 8:35:00 AM
- A poem for children :) - Many thanks Vijay, for your visit and your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/6/2019 7:22:00 AM
This was a happy fun poem my friend. It left me smiling. Best wishes in the contest
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/6/2019 8:17:00 AM
- Glad it made you smile - Many thanks for your visit and your comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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