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Without You....

Without you I cannot-talk, listen or hear Without you I cannot-share, care or give Without you I cannot-walk, dance or sing Without you I cannot-read, write or remember Without you I cannot-cherish, love or vow Without you I cannot- can you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/21/2010 6:47:00 PM
Wow! Superb write, Copeland. I like the way you employed the repetition and the last line is priceless! Awesome writing. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:45:00 PM
I love it, it's deep and very good.
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:13:00 PM
Copeland, simply wonderful! So concise yet poignant in its validation of how the pain of love can immobilize a person. Bravo! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:03:00 PM
another wonderful write
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:03:00 PM
oh we have all felt this ... love the last line sarah x
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